Lorenzo
Adofo was getting tired of Bobo always pushing everyone around. Sure, Bobo might be the alpha male, but Adofo didn’t think that it gave him the right to do whatever he wanted. Bobo goes around telling everyone what to do, he always gets the best food and eats first, and he gets all the females! Adofo was a nice guy and everyone liked him; he wondered why he couldn’t be leader of the group? After all, Bobo is a bit of a jerk, but he can be because he is the biggest and strongest of the gorillas. Adofo thought, one day someone is going to kick his ass!
One day, Bobo was down by the water getting a drink, and Adofo decided to follow him. Adofo thought, this is my chance! If I can just sneak up on him… Adofo began dashing head first towards Bobo, and right as Adofo was about to shove him into the lake, Bobo realized what was happening and quickly turned around. Bobo bared his fangs as he prepared himself for Adofo’s attack. Bobo then used Adofo’s own momentum against him and was able to roll with Adofo on top of him and then eventually throw him into the water.
A few days had passed and everyone was wondering where Adofo was. No one had seen or heard from him in days. They were about to migrate to a new eating ground, but Kibibi and Mkali, Adofo’s girlfriend and brother, did not want to leave him behind. They decided to organize a search party before they departed, but they found nothing. They thought, perhaps he was gunned down by poachers or captured to be exhibited at a zoo. Kibibi and Mkali noticed that everyone was worried, everyone except for Bobo…
I really liked how you used gorillas. It was a totally different spin on introducing a character and then having them disappear. The story was short and sweet and still got the point across as to who the main character was and why he had an issue with the second character. Plus I really liked thier names, very funny.
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